Black Poetry : HAIKU in motion"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unforegetable
    u thinkablely had me
    til u lost my heart
    :(
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definitely moving.
    that's fa sho.
    noticing the skills and the reason for the award bruh.


    hw
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes

    movin pass what was...to what is.:eek:
     
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    ma royal richness...i am really feelin' this piece heyah.
     
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    $$RICH$$

    Hey sugah boogah! :lol: :love: (them back room classes helped huh?!) :lol:

    Luv'n the process heah.... (now I gotz just one question.... where'd you find a word called "thinkablely"?) :lol:

    Luv ya' doll face :wink:

    N2
     
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    Rich! Rich! Rich!

    If thinkabley is not a word it is one now:lol:
    Tyte scribe poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhhh! yes

    lister.......ya feelin' da motion
    of what's here today from yesterday's
    myth........:D

    N2.........yeah! been workin' on it
    and da work came out my royal afro book
    in da study on da third shelf:kiss: :lol:

    Rashad......man i got words of many
    thankz bru......been work on some new
    poetic wording ....yeap it a word alright!:toast:
     
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    Rich,

    You hit it right on the money with this sad but well written haiku.
    Thanks so much for sharing.
     
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    Thankz Joyce

    still in the learning mold.....
     
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    $$RICH-NE$$.


    if she did not know
    now she does & it's too late
    your heart has moved on

    (& dat ain't always a bad thang!)

    thanks for sharin' & for inspirin' me
    to haiku a lil bit! :D

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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