Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Feb 5, 2002.
u thinkablely had me
til u lost my heart
that's fa sho.
noticing the skills and the reason for the award bruh.
movin pass what was...to what is.
ma royal richness...i am really feelin' this piece heyah.
Hey sugah boogah! (them back room classes helped huh?!)
Luv'n the process heah.... (now I gotz just one question.... where'd you find a word called "thinkablely"?)
Luv ya' doll face
Rich! Rich! Rich!
If thinkabley is not a word it is one now
Tyte scribe poet!
lister.......ya feelin' da motion
of what's here today from yesterday's
N2.........yeah! been workin' on it
and da work came out my royal afro book
in da study on da third shelf
Rashad......man i got words of many
thankz bru......been work on some new
poetic wording ....yeap it a word alright!
You hit it right on the money with this sad but well written haiku.
Thanks so much for sharing.
still in the learning mold.....
if she did not know
now she does & it's too late
your heart has moved on
(& dat ain't always a bad thang!)
thanks for sharin' & for inspirin' me
to haiku a lil bit!
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