Black Haiku : haiku #590

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  1. deepy

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    a cool/bright autumn day
    sharp and crisp.....
    smiling and clear
    i see - colors!
     
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    da fall of day break
    like the autumn rain full of
    beauty and colors
     
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    light hovers over
    wind whisks away the color
    ah winters coming
     
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    the color follows
    the wind to spread their colors
    to far out places.
     
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    autumn rains tingling
    light rays spreading wind swept col....
    or -DIASPORA
     
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    autumn winds have swept
    leaves drop off and roll pass- five
    ninety-my old home.....Gone
     
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    in da memory
    da rain drops wind sweep within
    autumn caressing
     
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