Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Feb 23, 2012.
beauty from Japan
seventeen syllables strong
captured in three lines
OH MY GOSH !!! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL !!!!
... i wasn't expecting such BEAUTY !!!!
wow ... in three little lines ... wow ... you're GREAT at THIS !!!!
canvas deep in stone written
Thank you, Destee... actually, I struggle with the Haiku form. I'm always impressed by the powerful meaning that true Haiku poets pack into 3 lines. I just keep practicing...
ya know?!!! ... some folk can really put a lot in those 3 lines ... we have a lot of great haiku here! ...
for you to combine the origin, beauty, simplicity, instructions, tutorial ... alla that ... in 3 lines ... please!
i'd need like 34 more ... and it would not even be a haiku! ...
Thanks again for sharing!
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