Black Haiku : Haiku ( 5-7-5)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Feb 23, 2012.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beauty from Japan
    seventeen syllables strong
    captured in three lines
     
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    OH MY GOSH !!! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL !!!!

    :lol: ... i wasn't expecting such BEAUTY !!!!

    wow ... in three little lines ... wow ... you're GREAT at THIS !!!!

    BRAVO !!!!! :toast: :toast: :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Japanese stylist
    canvas deep in stone written
    expressing meaning
     
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    Thank you, Destee... actually, I struggle with the Haiku form. I'm always impressed by the powerful meaning that true Haiku poets pack into 3 lines. I just keep practicing...
     
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    Completely dig!! :)
     
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    ya know?!!! ... some folk can really put a lot in those 3 lines ... we have a lot of great haiku here! ... :toast:

    for you to combine the origin, beauty, simplicity, instructions, tutorial ... alla that ... in 3 lines ... please! :)

    i'd need like 34 more ... and it would not even be a haiku! ... :)

    Thanks again for sharing!

    Love You!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Very nice
     
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