Black Poetry : had to write....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many many wish is what she had..
    Tryin ta stress me…On her dreams...But I look out for her…
    anyway.....…held her hand...
    she was my best friend...today i had to let it flow...
    let it out sumthin i held for so long......just
    relievin my thoughts after all these years...
    so bare with me as i tell this story in flow...
    together though thick and thin....
    Then she went on her own..went fo da wrong dude..
    I step back...let her find herself....I said...hmmmm
    Felt to his knees and gave as she please..
    Born two seeds from this reunion…
    He shot her she stab him…
    Moved out the hood
    Just to come back….
    Runnin to my door at 4 in da morn...
    tryin to get away...but she went back again
    and again...so i step back one more time...
    He rape her she fought for her life…
    Two seeds already there…makin two more..
    Tryin to gain his love…nothing came of this game…
    niether could be tame...so they blame each other...
    On a cold December night 1991 …she pickin up da kids…
    He sittin in da crack…
    Bang Bang 2 gun shots one in the window the other in her head..
    Oh no..kids in the backseat as daddy ran to the car
    To see what he had done…….babysitter called 911…
    But two weeks before he stood
    And told me he loved her to death….now dat I think about it
    I guess he did…sad to say..all she did was file fo divorce…
    Doors open to er…
    Team ran down…oh my…her mother was da head nurse..
    Kids in da corner cryin fo their mother
    And she cant hear..they didn’t know..thought she was sleep…
    On dis day my best friend was taken away from me…
    Most of all taken from her kids…
    He walk around like he own da the world..
    Thinking his daughter would never talk…she was 6 years old
    1 year later…she open her mouth…
    mommie is in heaven.....daddy made her go there...she said in the judge chambers...after a year he got his time...life......
     
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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!
    what a poetic story unfold
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes a story unfold in my head a thousand
    times wonderin if it was sumthin i could have done....
    but i know now it was nothin it was just her time hard to say but
    what else could it had been....my best friend, my sister, my family....
     
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    my goodness
    very intense read
    feeling this
    Peace
     
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    extreemly moving peice
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fam thanks for reading...
    just a thought on how to release
    i held so long...
    just thank yall fo reading...
    means alot
     
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    yes and felt deeply within
    but all will be mend on the end
     
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