Black Poetry : Had a thug December as a club member wanted to

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jan 25, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had a thug December as a club member wanted to
    Blaze fools after they raised the dues vote unanimous only a few
    Disagree and that pissed me off. It’s hard to wash behind my ears
    If the wine appears expensive and intensive, defensive and sincere
    Been here a minute, this tuff becoming a fast crisis like gas prices
    Foul situation of harmnony joining the Salvation Army get spices
    Get free shelter and be a helper on feeding the homeless and roam
    Less in the streets and carry plans and themes plus drink alone
    From military canteens, run through towns with a gun and two rounds
    No fun renowned in crime and doing down time in jail with clowns //
    My car horn warned of danger scorn as a stranger don’t belong
    Here at this redlight trying to get my head right something wrong
    This is bazaar and whack I’m about to get car jacked and walk home
    No gift or treasures need swift measures of safety to face me trapped
    In this crap perhaps man craving for fun waving a gun need a slap
    On the wrist,a bad act he’s looking at my cadilac my thoughts overlap
    It don’t make sense can’t defend against this
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight flow as usual rhymebad...but Ima say this one mo' gain...I would LOVE to hear your pieces live. Somehow reading your work doesn't seem to do enough justice. So much power in the spoken word!
     
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    Yes, HopelisRomantic, when responding to his flows, I have also mentioned how I'd like to hear a flow or two, live. Okay, rhymebad, that's another hint for you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now i see ya still droppin it butta smooth
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real
     
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    every line i feel in timed rhythm
    is real

    life be the deal~real
    dealt
    like
    raw
    skill
    tip ya hat

    while sangin in the rain
    strap up
    ta love

    mos don't know

    sho nuff
    love
    till
    the goin gets tuff

    be this
    ironical
    chill~
    feel?

    lovin ya, and feelin ya
    you just be you.

    DS
     
  7. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real yall felt this right here
     
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