Black Poetry : (H)imagery

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Oct 10, 2008.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You
    know
    how you like,
    how I do, what I do,
    when you do that thing you do to me

    Do me
    the way you do
    Poetry
    passionately
    imagine me your canvas
    get
    your
    write on
    with
    me

    Utilize
    your
    penmanship
    all over my frame-work-your magic
    In
    scribe
    the many ways
    you make me come
    to the impression that…
    I
    am
    your
    sole
    i n s p i r a t i o n

    Cursively
    suspend me in
    an earth-quaking-state
    until
    emotions cascade
    adorning
    your canvas with
    h
    o
    n
    e
    y

    d
    r
    i
    p
    p
    i
    n
    g

    esteem

    You
    know
    how you like,
    how I do, what I do
    when you do that thing you do to me,
    when you create
    Poetry

    Do
    that (again) for me

    please…


    copyright©2008cj ​
     
  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Sorry, but I'm rushing in here on this, cause the please is what did it of me, when you put that please on it, that's lock-down. Can't wait for one the poets to reply, Coco!


     
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    Imagining him enjoying what he does, when you do, what he loves. I'm diggin this, and I also like the creative title. I'm with Clyde here, the flowbacks should be great. Now, where's my popcorn? :)
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yummy, yummy yum! this was beautifully constructed.





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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now Coco......whewww love this piece
     
  6. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Come'on Rich, you can do it, if I did an Ode for AAlicia25, you can do this for Coco.

     
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    ok don't beg lol

    with all the drippin you've been doing lately is this erotic or passion

    lol:SuN037:

    yes you haven't lost your touch

    your brilliance shines again

    with a touch of that honey drip on top

    peace

    great to see you around again

    :terrific:
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Clyde, No apology needed. The fact that you made time to read
    is appreciated, BigTime! As for the word “please” it was in no way
    an invitation or call out of any sort for someone to flow an ode to coco.
    This piece is simply an expression of how poetry moves a reader. :)

    Watz,
    Exactly! You used one line to break my piece down to a powerful nutshell. You feel me… I love it!


    Sweet,
    The sentiment is mutual. I enjoy your art as well.


    I appreciate all yallz time spent reading and responding.

    Maddsistahlylove!
    Coco
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich,
    Though this piece wasn’t a call out, I would like to do that
    poetry thangy with you again sometime, because its been awhile
    and remember, you were my first.:)

    My So’ja Man,
    Did you sense some beggin between the lines? If so,
    I gots to watch that, can’t have anyone getting the wrong idea. LOL
    BTW… thanks, its great to be around again.

    Thanks gentlemen, your presence is always a pleasure.:)

    Coco
     
  10. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    Coco,

    I just love the word Please, as in pretty Please!


     
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