Black Poetry : H.E.R. (Heaven Emotion and Rhythm)

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  1. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    H.E.R. touch
    Is worth millions
    H.E.R. voice
    Is worth heavens
    H.E.R. time
    Is golden
    H.E.R. mind
    Is silver
    H.E.R beauty
    Is diamond
    H.E.R. dreams
    Are infinite
    H.E.R. warmth
    Is worth billions
    H.E.R. skin
    Is worth islands
    H.E.R. eyes
    Are worth stars
    H.E.R. smile
    Is worth planets
    H.E.R love
    Is worth existence
    H.E.R. pain
    Is repairable
    H.E.R. tears
    Are memorable but
    H.E.R laughter
    Is so valuable
    H.E.R. kisses
    Are antiques
    H.E.R. hair
    Is vintage
    H.E.R. style
    Is historical
    H.E.R. taste
    Is expensive
    H.E.R. commitment
    Is eternal
    H.E.R. mistakes
    Are worth cents
    H.E.R. insecurities
    Are worth dollars
    H.E.R. womb
    Is worth rubies
    And H.E.R heart is priceless
    She wants someone to love H.E.R
    This Godly embodiment of
    Heaven
    Emotion and
    Rhythm
    She wants H.I.M.
    Her
    Ideal
    Mirror
    Because she should be able to see herself within him
    Reflecting back what she deserves
    She knows she could mean the world to someone
    Because all she wants is his physical, mental and spiritual payment
    But from H.E.R experience
    A lot of men just can’t afford it
     
  2. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boy i think I am about to be poetically turned out. Everytime you drop something it is on point and leaves me pheening for the next time you shall drop something. Your name says it all Phenomenon.
     
  3. Zulile

    Zulile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent write, Phenomenon! wow.
    :heart:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Phenomenon:
    I know she sees you when she looks in the mirror because in order for you to pen this magnificent truth you have to be able to understand it and it is crystal clear that YOU do. I read this and thought to myself, I'm not crazy for thinking that there are some brothas out here that really know what's up. Your like a diamond in the rough. And I will be floating on this all week.

    BTW....don't stay gone for so long....you see we miss you when your away.



    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:


    So Much Luv
     
  5. truetothecause

    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (bl)Absolutely Awesome.....

    Drop dead on the Nail

    PHENOMENALLY

    describing...

    the Power of

    S.PIRITUALLY H.EALING E.NERGY...

    :SuN014:

    M.E.
    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i couldn't agree more this was outstanding
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hard to say what snagged me more...how each line fed upon the last, or how you so eloquently pinpointed what is integral to H.E.R....I'd say the latter. Agreeing with the sisters before me, absolutely, phenomenal.
     
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    Beautifully said and done Phenomenon :kiss1:

    Peace
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A wonderful expression...

    that I enjoyed soul deep!


    Be blessed
    Coco
     
  10. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you All! I enjoyed writing this and I enjoyed hearing how you all vibed to it as well, much appreciation
     
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