Black Poetry : Gypsy

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come to fret

    With my Gypsy,

    Washed out to sea

    Underclothes,

    On a body there-

    Once again,

    To be lonely

    Sharing...

    Your wealth

    Reading palms of somebody else

    On the road without roadies

    All left alone

    Feels;

    Some ways from home

    Life sings with this Gypsy

    Our favorite tune

    Blue-notes ~

    Have outplayed our

    Song-



    1poetsought ~ Copyright 2003
     
  2. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That ISHT was sho'nuff!

    Makes me want to check my priorities. Keep dispensing it.
    One Love..................
     
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    While this is perfection as always,
    it's also very sad...

    Once again,
    To be lonely
    Sharing...
    Your wealth
    Reading palms of somebody else
    On the road without roadies
    All left alone
    Feels;


    quite moving,
    Angelic
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes u have crafted a masterpiece
    yet the sad & lonely feeling
    this was awesome
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS

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    wow...u sho did snap me up in the end, but I am not surprised when 1Poetsought brings it. :)
     
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    Peace Triniti, thanks!
     
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