Black Poetry : Guy cool in Highschool

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Guy cool in Highschool

    Hood made wanted good grades had desires of writing but
    It requires fighting for a spot in life the slop and strife cut
    My ambition and the **** friction was great, I knew it
    was true can’t just finish highschool and start up a book legit
    so I’m shook abit on how to accomplish this, because dummy
    quotes leads to funny jokes and doing crummy coke cost money
    and that’s not the answer, far as writing, I got a bad itch thought
    you had to be rich and make a sad switch to upper class, dang caught
    daydreaming have to stay gleaming with grammar, shoes, store bought
    from Walmart which is a tall start in saving cash craving to pass this
    class, writing is not real work but its an exciting deal to alert the brisk
    public with platters on subject matter, someday want tall pockets and
    like small rockets my brains will take off, want slick fame and only fans
    will know my nickname and become quickly large like Nicki Manarge
    started to think as a writer don’t like stink biters critics I try dodge
    had talent for it took long walks at home talked about many books
    to mom and dad, it gave me an identity craved for a remedy I’m hooked
    on good deeds and now should feed knowledge in college to others
    If I’m a success but need a wise compromise it’s like dividing peach
    When everyone deciding to reach slice it in a way so that each
    Think they have to biggest piece and yu my friend has compromise
     
  2. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace fam.

    Incredible how you just line up these words fam. Would be interested in hearing how you deliver vocally too.

    One,

    - Ikoro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop bruh !!!!!
     
  4. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice! This sounds like a rap that needs to be heard :dance3:
    Keep flowing...
     
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