Black Poetry : Gun Smoke ~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 15, 2010.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our hard-line policy
    Might need apology
    Forgive my hating
    Boo

    In "The Art of War"
    Homie knew the score
    Defeat spelled out for you

    Good old boyz
    Dedicated noise
    Committed to the zoo

    With the table turned
    Prisoners confirm
    Jesus Loves
    Your crew

    Passion on the run
    Militant to some
    Gun smoke ~
    Fills the room


    Darryl Abdu Omari :flamet:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ copyright 2010
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yeah ! right after the boom booom )))))
     
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    Unfortunately that is the scenario for many

    BLESS UP BRO FLOW ON
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Niiiiicccceeeee....tight and concise. it was fun filling in the images

    great write.
     
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