Black Poetry : Gun=man (a "too often" story)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    an analogical explanation
    for his creation
    a brother cleans his gun
    until it's
    "sharp as a tack"

    razor fine creases / gator / belt /
    gator / shoes / in a noticeable hue /
    maybe lime green or cirulean blue

    super FLY...

    looking good
    shiny black
    smell of oil
    hammer ****ed back
    like an arrogant head

    pulling triggers
    like their smooth verses
    from the back of his throat
    to promote his FLY ***

    bullets making paths
    with a pimp strut
    smoke escaping the tip
    the smell of black and milds from
    his lips

    that brother had a gun
    that personified him...

    cold stare into the world
    with one thing in mind
    destruction / to protect
    an erection that he could never
    find satisfaction with/without it
    in his hand...

    ...circumcising life as his
    reflection is from his soul
    that gun

    completes him makes him feel
    whole.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmm...
    you always put it down right! -7 :spinstar:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks queen I try.
     
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    good one verb!!!!
     
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