Black Poetry : GUILT SIN & HONESTY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HE WAITS TO HEAR ...FORGIVE ME.
    AS SHE LOWERS HER HEAD
    SHAMEFUL EYEZ GLAZED INTO THE SKIES
    AND PRAYZ TO HEAR HIM SAY ...I LOVE U.
    BUT HE TELLS HER NO MORE LIES
    BREAKS DOWN AND CRY

    SHE REACH OUT TO CONSOLE HIS HEART
    BEHOLD HE MUST IN TRUTH
    SHE WALK INTO THE FIRE
    HE DO DESIRE HER LOVE
    FALLIN' GAPS OF MEMORIES TAKE TOLL
    SHE ROLL IN SADNESS OF LIES
    DESPLAYED IN HONESTY ONE CRY
    WHY ALL THE RED LIES
    SHAME BE NOT OF MY HEAD
    SILENTLY SHE LAID TO BED
    HE ONLY WISH IN THOUGHTS
    NOW SET TO BED HIS HONOR
    DEAD,,,

    LOST LOVE IN MOTIONS
    THE NOTIONS YET SAID
    NOW!
    WHO'S FOOLING WHO!?

    FORTH I SIN MY LOVE
    I CONFESS DES MORNING
    MY MIND TOOK CONTROL
    I LOST MY SOUL
    AND NOW MY HEART BE OF PAIN
    I FEEL SO ASHAME....HEAD HUNG LOW:

    SHE WHISPER SO SOFT
    BUT U R FREE HONESTY
    IS THE KEY:
    HE STAND BESIDE HER OPEN WOUND
    PLACE HIS HAND UPON HER CHEST
    GENTLY SAID: I LOVE U
    SHE LOOKED TO HEAVEN WITH A SMILE
    MY PRAYERS HEARD.......FORGIVEN
    YA LUST WAS TOO MUCH I KNOW
    BUT FAITH WAS ALL U NEEDED MY SWEET
    SEEK YA HEART FROM FEARS WIPE AWAY
    THOSE TEARS

    GUITY SINS HURTS
    HONESTY BRINGS PAIN TO HEART
    THAT MENDS
    U HAVE A SECOND CHANCE........to be continue!pt2
     
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    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOH! **** dayum des piece of art is a
    part of ya book in desplay where's pt.#2
    cant wait........man i love this one
    mr. poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I TRUELY THANX U A MILLION TYMES HONEYLUV
    THIS BE PART OF MY BOOK INDEED...AGAIN THANX
     
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    Oh so real is this hea!!

    been there and back more times than I care to mention. You forgive and forgive...
    my heart was mended while on bended knee...can't wait for part 2!!
     
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    AFRI

    U FEEL ME ........THANX SWEETIE
    PT.#2 BOUT TO GET LOSE
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICHNE$$.....

    this is one of those pieces i had to read and
    then come back to... but i felt you... deeply.

    is there something you wanna talk about sweetie?

    ShyninInYourRichness...
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HUMMMMMM!!

    WELL ! HUMMMM!!! YEA!
     
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    lovin' this piece, it's uhmmm...very heartfelt, dear poet.
     
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    LISTER

    THANX SIS.
    THIS IS A PIECE OF WHAT I'M WORKING ON
     
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