Black Poetry : Guess...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, May 1, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Guess I'm falling for you
    My love,
    What else is new?

    Seems like you're always in my head
    In my mind
    Although sometimes I try to forget

    Guess...
    I've been in similiar situations before

    Took my time
    Brokenhearted
    Because I'm so going to miss you
    Late in the evening light

    Guess...
    This is good bye
    What happen to you my friend?

    Loving you so crazily
    That I wish
    That I didn't always hide my face

    Lovely
    Yet hopeless
    To let you into my life

    The love is gone
    From my memory

    You were my best friend
    And I will cherish you
    Forever
    The rest of my life

    My behavior
    Childish
    I'm in denial

    How come things couldn't be
    More simple
    To be with you

    For us
    Seems like
    It might never be meant to be

    I'm going to miss you so deeply
    Passionate thug life
    Of mine

    You give me so much meaning for living
    Southern precious
    So devine.

    Desert Storm
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well I....

    guess so....!! :lol:
    Very nice...very nice~
    Do ya' thang mami!!
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well I...

    "never meant to cause you no pain,I just wanna go back to bein the same and I only want to make things right,before you walk out of ma life"(continuation) ha ha ha. You reminded me of that song witht the first part. Thanks glad you catchin the vibe sis. You make things happen. Thanks gurl.
    Desert Storm
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was...

    inexplicably acapella...like singing to no music to prove your voice is true...i felt it...doyathingshawty!!!

    sean.
     
  5. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no guessin here

    i can relate to that!
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORMY....

    guess what?!...

    dis is wonderful... (& you know i wouldn't say it unless i meant it!)...

    thank you for sharing!

    Peace&Love...
    SunShyne~
     
  7. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm likin this smoothe piece-Beautifully done!
    Jyntl
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    Desert Storm

    have u ever heard "I Wish" by
    shaniece wilson b4 her career
    came to a close? LOL

    the same theme i swear

    i used to wear that song out
    during my sophmore year in high
    school which was about 6 years ago
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DS,

    I "guess" ya got ya flow on on this here Queen!!!!

    Tight!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  10. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't Know What to Say!

    Y'all,thanks a lot. Ya know I want to repsond personally to this. I can't just get responses and be like thanks y'all bye. ha ha ha. Firstly,poetsean,you are a very good poet my dear and I always love readin ya. Thanks for your replys. Two fish,you all dat and den some,babygurl.Love readin ya also.Can't wait until you come out wit a cd or a movie soon. Crossin ma fingers. GA_Sunshyne,Yeah I know gurl. You are ever so true to me. Thank You. You make me smile. Lovin readin ya and hearin from ya. Peace,gurly.Jyntlebreez thank you also.Love your screen name also. You be reppin fa sho. And thanks for replying to the last poem I did. You were the only one. I read ya but I never responded but I would like to say double thank ya.You're true Thanks.Poeticdelight,I havn't heard that song but I got to check it out. You are a lovely poetress,love readin ya poems. They da bomb,gurly. Fa sho. They extra extra tyte. Ha ha ha ha!My playa playa,the one and only GQ! How you doing? What's been happenin wit ya lately. Well,that's good. You be spittin some good rythmes too,ma brotha. Thanks for the reply.So good to see ya and hear from ya.Thank you.
     
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