Quiet Poetry Lounge : Guess who I seen today?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Nov 29, 2004.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~I saw "me" today~

    Not impressive to the sight, so I ask myself why?
    what was it about me...not pleasing to the eye?

    Well, I stayed in that "maze" ...that seemed like forever,
    but I wasn't comming out, til I got it together.

    ~see~

    I lost a large portion of me, a long time ago,
    the "me" you see before you...is not the "me" you know.

    I got to leave all this maddness, and I'm comming at life strong,
    all the things I thought was right...turned out to be all wrong.

    ~Could that be the reason...I saw "me"?

    Gave all the love I had inside, and I gave it generously,
    yes, the love I gave to others...should've been for "me".

    I now have the tools I need, to turn that love "inside",
    and I'll soon be free from this "maze"...that had "Me" trapped alive.​
     
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    I understand that one! I think is time I see me too.
    Loved the drop Sister!
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    To see that inner you that has been there all along, yet clouded over, veiled, behind the mist of other plans, arrangements, and the much ado about everything else accept yourself...wow...Yea, I guess you can tell, I am absolutely loving this one. Flow on sis, please!!!!
     
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    reflection , reflection
    mirror mirror on da wall
    whom i see before my all

    it is thee u so see
    understand openly

    i saw myself smiling thank u sis for this one .
     
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    Queen, u might actually be my real "twin"...lol...U are writing my life
     
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