Black Poetry : growth rap

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gempis, Sep 9, 2003.

  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was
    twisted out
    riddled back
    all over out
    full of lack
    clawing at brick
    kicking some craze
    washover sick
    torture white haze

    then I
    picked it out
    roared the mud
    dropped a bout
    scored the love
    ran by the wind
    cleaned some water
    crashed to within
    got the hotter

    now I
    think the light
    live the sun
    friends with the right
    breathing the one
    trying the joy
    loving the way
    feeding on enjoy
    happy to stay
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so tight...and it has rhythm. i loved this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes the flow of it was smooth and sweet
    flow on
     
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    tyte flow:)
     
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    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Innovative and creative

    I like the unique style and delivery.

    The play with words is magnificent.

    I like new ways of writing.

    Peace and poetry,
    UniverSouL
     
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    yeah gurl...
    that what i'm talking bout
    i like that
    special delivery
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all so much. I was just experimenting with freestyle and play on words, and I appreciate the response immensely. :)
     
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    now I
    think the light
    live the sun
    friends with the right
    breathing the one
    trying the joy
    loving the way
    feeding on enjoy
    happy to stay


    wow.....I felt this completely, your writing my story! Loving it!
    this was beautiful yellow brick road....with a great ending!
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL... I see ur taking on a new style... I like I like...
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so very much, angelicsage! :)

    And thanks, poeticly.
     
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