Black Poetry : grown apart

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by luvNwords, Sep 5, 2003.

  1. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To my dearest love,

    Over the past months things have changed between us
    we dont talk like we used to and laughter
    is totally out of the question
    I cant remember the last time i've seen
    a smile on your face
    Arguing is the only thing we seem to have
    in common now
    the smallest things causes the biggest arguments
    between us and i'm tired of feeling this way

    Last night when we were talking
    i brought the subject up about us growing apart
    but for some reason you wanted to change the subject
    could it be that you are feeling the same way????
    well if you are then i think we should call it quits
    while we're still civil to each other
    i dont want to be like so many couples
    who only stay together because they are used to each other
    when you've been together as long as we have
    change is sometimes scary

    But if being with someone else
    means keeping you in my life as
    a friend then thats what i think we should do
    you have been a blessing to me and i dont think
    i could take losing you as a friend
    you taught me so much, hell you're the
    one who taught me how to love
    i dont think i can take another moment
    of seeing you so unhappy and i
    know that i cant

    But i dont want to make this seem
    like i'm doing you some favor or
    that i'm doing this for you
    the truth is i havent been happy
    either for a long time
    if we could be happy like
    we were in the past then
    i'm willing to work our differences out
    but if we cant
    then we should just let go
    and save each other the pain
    of being miserable

    No matter what decison we come to
    i want you to know that i will
    love you forever and always!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    luvNwords...your words seem straight from your heart and honest. only grown up people can break up like this, not leaving a trail of broken dishes, hurt feelings, and bad words behind. i liked this alot
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this the way it's done
    many need to learn from dis
    very nice
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice...
    not harsh easy and conduct with style n taste
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel u... i so feel u...
     
  6. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You really know how to put your feelings down in a way that even if someone hasn't gone throught what you have, they can still feel you, cause I certainly do. I love this.
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    open and honest. i love it..
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    growing apart is what some do...
    if their love is strong, it is called growing closer...

    peace.
     
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