Black Poetry : Growing Up Dolo Pt 1

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Incarcerated within self confines

    The sunshine don't shine for i refuse to step into it

    I do this as vengence competence for my hurt

    Unfortunately i fail to see my own worth

    Evident with an empty corner people assume my people gone

    Maybe if i blow the horn maybe they'll all hear me

    But they fail to hear me or see me believe me

    Need further truth well step into the confides of my scantuary

    You'll notice i'm in the fartherest corner in my place of solitude

    Locked away why doesn't he come out i hear em say

    Cause those people downstairs are people i don't care for

    So i close the door only to venture out when i must

    These people are strangers who i refuse to trust

    Outside this world are more starangers and traitors

    Not once do i speak for they look for cracks n leaks in my shell

    Pick on soft spots so i avoid my distance

    But i fear interaction which is immenent

    All of this results in a clash of mentals n emotions

    Can't decipher what is what for i feel something different

    Crash burn as i go over the hill of the extremes

    Anger n sadness such savages no remorse

    I lie on the side of the path looking like a corpse

    As my insides are hollowed out by ragning infernos

    Of emoitions along with no friends and uncertainity on where to go

    And the result is my life Growing up Dolo
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    you broke this down to perfection ........lovin da style
     
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    Great feeling in this....Somber tone.

    But oh-so descriptive of a reality and a mindset.

    Well done.













    There is a difference between being "alone" and being "lonely;" but, sometimes, the two are the same.
     
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    nice nice.. I realized about half way through I was reading in the voice of Cool G Rap..
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks y'all
     
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