Quiet Poetry Lounge : Growing ...apart

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Growing ...*Apart*

    Last night while you were sleeping,
    I listened to every beat of your heart.

    And I tried to find out just what it was,
    that made us...grow apart.

    Oh yeah, I remember now, who was the blame,
    it was 'what you stooped to, that's a **** shame.

    For what you have stooped to, I just simply can't hang,
    but it's your way of life...guess its all in the game.

    I was lost...at the time you met me,
    but...with you, I saw my "worth".

    Now I'm searching my heart, trying to figure out,
    why you're dealing...in so much dirt.

    So if by chance, you find...another,
    good-luck to you...cause you'll need it brother.

    For what you have now...is tarnished "Gold",
    and what you seek, is... "a story untold".

    But maybe what you need, is a change in your life,
    and maybe this time around...you'll know how to treat a wife.

    Or maybe the change, will make you remember,
    of the day we met...in late september.

    The strangest part is...that my heart doesn't hurt,
    cause for the longest time now...my heart's on alert.​
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang this was deep
    flying with emotions
    tight drop i could feel the
    release in this scribe....
    flow head on poet

    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love on this angel, glad you were able to feel me on this.
     
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    whoaaaaaaaa! life can be funny and deal u a hand
    put when u start playing the cards become joker wilds
    this was deep and felt made tears in my eyes ..........
    tyte release here .
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, the joker walks the board for awhile...but soon dies of it's own strength. thanks for the luv you give.
     
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    i know whatcha saying on this piece...
    it can happen over time...silently...tyte scribe
    one love
    khasm
     
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    In any relationship there are limits to what we can take, as heart breaking as it is, sometimes it's best to end it. As sad as the subject matter is, it ends with a sense of strength. I'm feeling this piece.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you (sadly) have to remove a "heart" ...to save one. my thanks to you for your wisdom and luv.
     
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