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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    There's a shadow following me
    doing everything i do you see
    one thing i notice was no face
    but hands in prayer speaking grace

    Dark smoken gray shadow often
    behind sometime in front or to da side
    then it fades only to re-apear
    never bring doubt or any fear

    Now i wonder do it pose a heart
    a soft love and acts that's smart
    or is it the demon of my soul
    coming to torment me, "being bold"

    why does it come when i'm in light
    and seem to never come in da night
    is it my angel to protect me
    or my double for eyez to see

    Who is this figure structure
    why do he apear like an spirit
    so i try to walk right in his sight
    seem like an mirror image of me
    smoke grey shadow.
    :rolleyes:
     
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    $$RICHMAN$$ becoming the mystical spiritual philosopher. interestingly different. well versed. continue the growth, my friend. diversity in poetry is a wonderful thing.

    the river floweth.
     
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    Big thankz brother baller I like to create from all four corners
     
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