Black Poetry : GREATEST TREASURE (two lovers )

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beyond myth , notions abid
    lay da story untold and hid
    From darkness the light shine
    to thy life , motion of mines
    A treasure hub closer in depth
    where true love and hope is kept
    Colored in golden nub & spray
    great warmth springing this way
    She was graceful and mild
    always sharing sunny smiles
    pose'd in the finest of pearls
    with this sensual hot swirl
    Deep confession of da womb
    da passion of love lingers & loom
    sweet affection of life's direction
    she was the glist to my everlasting
    The story is song , between right & wrong
    spoken in the gentle of tone
    The greatest treasure , the gift to life
    is thy Queeneth, to man his wife
    Da back bone purity and his security
    she become his only memory
    where he treasure her in da heart
    and understand within at start
    she knows his worth
    under vow and never to lay curse
    bonding color of black beauty
    togetherness to wittnessing how truely
    a treasured soul can be
    of loving like one , two , three
    in black lovelace
    at the helms of a secret place
    where hearts now be traced
    to da GREATEST TREASURE of two lovers

    :jumping: :flirt: :blowkiss: :couple: :kiss1: :flowers:
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is so true my bratha about the two lovaz
    i was feelin that drop so keep on droppin it like its hott...lol
    flo on .....




    blackluv and bp
     
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    More precious than gold and rubies and all that.
    Man this poem was deep.
    flo on Rich
    One love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thanks ghettoambition and skrybble7 for the visit and supporting words
     
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    the greatest treasure i found was you
    the greatest love i found was in us

    love the flo rich.
    :smooch:
     
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    A treasure beyond measure. I heard that Brother.......Do ya thang babee;)
     
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    The secret bliss of lovers, a story kept between the two, a precious moment lingering in their minds. Beautiful piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thanks Nevar indeed what is found is within da two souls the treasure of love

    word up sista spicybrown the great fine of a treasured heart is sweet u know
    big thankz .

    In the depth of love in the blissful fine within is a treasure heart for keep sake
    thankz a million sista watz
     
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    A Queen is thy gift
    she is the treasure
    together our love is golden

    one i had to bring back as i envision the priceless jewel and all that worth.
     
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    ... for surely thy rare TREASURE
    is not only unique, but, most definitely
    graceful upon the eyes and alluring
    in depth to the soul. A beautiful
    TREASURE not only captivates,
    but it also illuminates, stimulates and
    more importantly
    differentiate.
     
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