Black Poetry : GREATEST JOURNEY of da CAVE (thy Womb)Sonnet

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tale of da caveman better known as blackman

    here today we now stand from which we came
    each and everyone of us journey a path da same
    created by da backbone of a queenz hot cream
    where she arise wit kitty and set off some steam
    producing in da ovary to run da egg to bed
    down a dark tunnel of da fallopian tube not scared
    to rest in da uterus for a creational life
    by da queen we often call lover or wife
    through da womb of such cave
    nine months or less birth is made
    journey da cave wit great pride
    while we all take on this wonderful ride
    dialate shoot from da hips she twitch push & whip
    movin at our pace down da cave for light we face
    cervix open to a four here we come like an uncore
    out da path of darkness through a vagina is light
    a great journey we just now sight
    it was of her da backbone our woman da image is clone
    now she ready to set da stage and life tone
    as thy fathers await breadwinner and strong
    to make way for da life a home, it's a journey we all lone
    this my new sonnet song ! am i right am i wrong
    anyway we here ! and yes we belong from thy womb.
     
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    Mornin' Sir Richess...

    The journey of life, everything and everyone in its proper place.

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    yes

    we did

    yes we did

    :blowkiss:
     
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    you know I'm feeling this piece write on!:luvv:
     
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    Thankz family coco / so'ja / nevar the path which we journey to life is beautiful at first light.
     
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    What a blessed journey it is, oh the wonders and beauty of a life. Wonderful scribe.
     
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    yes sis it is a wonderful and beautiful thing to bring forth life through the cave of da womb.
     
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