Black Poetry : Greatest Inspiration

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She gives me a reason 2 breathe.
    A goal 2 achieve.
    My every waking moment is spent thinking of her beauty.
    Hoping Jah blesses me with another 24.
    Nothing in this world makes me feel as complete as being in her presence.
    I'm completely awestruck by her essence.

    She's my sun on earth, my physical guiding light.
    Jah sent her 2 me when the time was just right.
    Thanks 2 her I secure emotionally,
    I know when all's said & done, her love 4 me will never leave.
    She makes my future look bright.
    She's the greatest inspiration in my life.

    I'm her puppet without strings,
    2 satisfy her completely is my life's dream.
    When she says jump, I fly.
    I don't even have a limit 2 how high,
    Cuz, it's 2 please her.

    When she speaks 2 me, it's like conversing with angels.
    I insist on being funny cuz when she laughs, her face illuminates with a faint glow.
    And my heart skips beats.
    Sometimes I wonder what I ever did 2 deserve her.
    I'd unhesitantly lay down my life 2 prevent anything from hurting her.
    I love her unconditionally.
    The type of love a father has 4 his seed.





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  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my God...
    this was so beautiful...
    I read it three times
    just to absorb more of it
    and every time I thought
    I'd :cry: ....
    wow...I've read a lot
    of great pieces from you
    but this one...

    ...I'm speechless, the
    emotion radiates from
    this piece...truly...

    I...am speechless
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS WAS SO SWEET!

    NICE DROP, SO SWEET AND SENTIMENTAL!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This may be the most touching piece I've read from you...wow...like angelicsage.....speechless.
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U so very much 4 the feel of this piece.

    She is my reason 4 being who & how I am, & everything I do is 4 her, she's my Princess.

    She changed my negative mindset into a Positive one.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sweet sister angelic, I am overjoyed 2 have touched U within, enough 2 cause speechlessness. From the depth of my be-ing, I humbly thank U.


    mslusciousb, thank U 4 the read & blessings, it means a whole lot, believe.

    watz, I think this is the most emotionally inspired piece I've ever written.
     
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