Black Poetry : Greatest Gift

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Package this feelin
    i so pose
    it's a gift like dis rose

    unwrap the emotions
    let self flow
    show dis love
    what u know

    let the comfort seattle
    no need to dress in leather
    i see u
    as u are and a love by far
    the beauty of night
    light up the sky
    smile a glow don't be shy
    as i roam where i fly
    the warmth of bond
    to be held
    as a kiss sealed
    upon da wishing well
    a spell is cast unto ya heart
    this where our love truely start
    see i need not the fancy stuff
    i don't want the biggest package
    i care not the new atire
    my gift is to lite ya fire
    see babe ur the greatest gift of all
    everytime u beckon the call

    i love the way u flow
    da walk & sway
    ummm! want it my way
    the small little freaky style
    and how we play & smile
    see this the gift from above
    it what we call love

    the gentle whispers at night
    the protection i give
    throughtout da night
    the way we cuddle & hug
    we feel da burnning bug
    like a cupid arrow strike
    and set the sexy mood right
    and before day light
    together we struggle nor fight
    just take our love flyte
    to the gift from above
    this what we call love
    ur the greatest gift
    :heart: :love: :heart: :kiss: :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your poetry redefines love $Rich!! :) :thanks: as always :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    taking it to a new way and flava
    that makes love smile in it's self
    thankz
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when love flow
    u never know
    it move in wayz
    that make u amazed
    it from above
    this thing we call love .
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful as always so beautiful
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich :wave:

    Your poetry continues to amaze me!! It is simply wonderful!!

    ~Sierra~:heart: :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    serenti........i thanketh thee love is awesome

    sierra............thanketh thee as i continue
    this journey down love's halls to show the world
     
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    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, this poem be a gift!!
    thanx for sprinklin' your love down on us!
     
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    this is sooooo beautiful!
     
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    Jyntlbreez.................most welcome love is need every hour


    LovelyG...........ur beautiful sistah! love just grand thank u
     
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