Black Poetry : Great Storm

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Mar 20, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great storm from the Gulf
    Let your rage subside
    Be your winds calm
    Make low your tide

    Your strength seems wicked
    You are unforgiving
    You are hard and tough
    The land has yielded
    It has had enough

    You have made your point
    Yet you want to do more
    Nothing can withstand you
    Not the money of the rich
    Not the cries of the poor

    Great storm
    You've become the darkside of nature
    Attacking from behind skies colored gray
    Relentless rain your calling card
    As flood levels rise with each storm-filled day

    But you and I both know
    Your destructive tenure will be short-lived
    For the power you so readily display
    Is a power not your
    Ther power is his

    And in his time
    And through his will
    You'll be exposed as a puppet
    You great storm
    Will soon be still

    BE
    (c) 2000
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BRAVO, Poet!!

    a
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow Heartbeat!!

    & Amen!
    I can dig this here!!:)
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    top line flow ..........dis be tyght BE...........
    man i feel dis one inside my bones
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dug this BE!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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