Black Poetry : Great Expectations

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What are your expectations...
    I feel the need to know
    is it just to
    'get in where you fit in'
    ...my mind
    ......my soul; or
    .........my mocha brown skin
    Practicality tells me
    you'd rather elude
    an explanation
    uncalculated contemplation
    I offer an assurance
    for you to envision
    but you turn down
    the invite
    stating "time altercations" - INDECISIONS
    you've rationalized
    your immediate
    [Just If]ication, I see
    I anticiapte
    the obvious
    with no apology
    P
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    b
    l
    y
    I just don't think you're
    ready to put your
    trust, love, and reliance
    altogether
    in a package
    as a gift
    from you to me


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    Great flow!!! And you'd have every right ta know of his expectations!!!! Get the answers ya seek!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You alwayz know just ...

    what to say....and I appreciate that
    about you....Mr. Chocolate Fine!

    Thank you brotha, dear brotha o' mine...
    :heart: ya'!!
    (hey -- I need an "im" soon)!!
     
  4. Desert Storm

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    Writing's On the Wall

    Thall shalt Say My Name! Ha ha ha ha ha,gurl you are going through some thangs that I've been through. Wow,I'm starting to get a clearer picture of what you're going through.I'll be praying for ya sis. I ended up dumping him for be so undecisive and moved on. It hurt and still hurts sometimes I wonder about him all the time. It was so hard getting over him took a year to really get over him. I don't have a man now,I've just been being good to my self lately and trying to be patient for the right one! WEll,keep yo head up sis. I feel ya. Sometimes writing and poetry is your best friend. Stay up. I'm here for ya. In afronet you were also there for me.So still don't worry too much. Ok babe,Stay sweet
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya' heard me...

    and Storm dear -- you pegged it right on to!
    I am emotionally distracted these
    days...
    sometimes up, sometimes suspended between
    a rock and a hard place....
    I really can't say I'm "down" or "knocked out"...
    just that my feelings are getting the
    best of me in my "merry-go-round" of life's desires!!

    Good lookin' out tho'!!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No prob gurl

    No prob,you real,you be reppin for realz i gotta go,but peace and thanks for the read. GOT YO BACK
    Sincerely,
    Yo sistah friend,
    Desert Storm
     
  7. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin ya sis!!

    If I told you in detail about my expectations from...I'd be all day so...
    I'll just say

    Can relate...can relate
    CAN RELATE!!!
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm...

    And I know ya' do - gurlfrynd! Thank you~~
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afridancr~

    You know I know....don't we all
    have a book of "expectations"?!
    Basically .... :lol:
    Thanks for readin' ME again!!
     
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