Black Poetry : Grease

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  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I lost to lust layed-back
    displayed in a tempered mood
    in front of the glass mirror tube
    per disgust
    i rush to bathe and evade the
    rickety rain that falls as dust
    as the window pane rattles
    givin me the fifth degree
    slipped into this
    residency
    increasing my term to coin to grips
    the chip-toothed grin of reality
    per conditioning
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said too
    sho ya right
     
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    gosh this was deep
    feeling how
    each line
    held a beat
    nice one indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Brudda $$$RICH$$$

    I'm glad you can feel tha riddum Bluewater.
    Thank you much.

    One-love
     
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