Black Poetry : Gravity

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  1. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gravity....
     
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    beautifully written such that holds and pull da heart is pure gravity of love
    awesome write poet !
     
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    When a force holds you so tightly, it feels like an out of body experience once it lets you go. This poem has impact poet.
     
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    ...then Gravity pulls us back to the surface...

    Been there & dunnit, Poet. Thank you for Scribing real life with such precision.

    One
     
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    I really really really really wanna thank anyone & everyone that take the time to read my words cuz I don't even consider myself a poet. I'm basically just jotting down some things going own in my big head and what is surprising is that you guys actually like them (hopefully). Just thanx for all the love!
     
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    Well consider yourself a poet, that was spiritual love in a nutshell! :hearts4:
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Naw....Yall are the real poets on this site. I will never call myself one..Thanx for the luv!
     
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    I think/know we have the will to stop our fall...and gravity will never feel us.
    become one with your spirit, and you will Rise, not Fall...to greater heights
    awesome piece poet, there's to your rise :toast: ...you can do it.
     
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    This is such a heartfelt poem full of emotions. You are a poet.
     
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    What a sad Poem. But sometimes we make our own bed. :whip:
     
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