Black Poetry : Graveyard #1

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GRAVEYARD #1

    I’m brave and hard walking by the graveyard
    Crave for my St. Bernard oh the Pave so hard
    Under my feet as the night creeps the fright deep
    Fight on the street but with this might freak
    No doubt the trees are without leaves shout and squeeze
    My fist scary clout made me sneeze like a wet piss in the breeze
    The air turned into a concerned affair grew smoky fell on my knees
    Dust blew through my nose smell death and the hell with the rest
    Seem to swell my chest bells seem to ring unrest must tell or confess
    Ground seem to sink around started to stink afraid to blink in stress
    The dew was heavy like a chevy legs sweaty and ready to buckle best
    Cemetery fence seem to walk and talk then stalk me body got slimmer
    A ghostly situation mostly information from a book I remember
    Shook on a warm December blood cook in my body simmer
    Burial grounds on merrier bounds carrier of crown of steel
    Remote possibility these ghost quotes could be silly for real
    The soul of the dead seem to control my head couldn’t feel
    Myself anymore with lyrical be seeing spiritual being
    Should be physical fleeing this, need a miracle freeing
    Me, too much-deceased people from funeral at church steeple
    Haunt and clutch to feeble living seem to search for a needle
    In a haystack unforgiving

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. Rashad

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    Deep rhyming my Brutha!!

    I can dig this!! Yep!:toast:
     
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    You lost me in the end...
    "Me, too much-deceased people from funeral at church steeple
    Haunt and clutch to feeble living seem to search for a needle
    In a haystack unforgiving "


    But i definitely enjoyed the flow...
     
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    yeah me too, just this one time bruh, tell me the storyline and the plot of this posting
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad, shaneak AND brotherman THANKKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL TOOK A LITTLE TIME TO WRITE FOR REAL YO
     
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    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No disrespect to the numerous fine Scribes in these parts, but Maddrapper, you get my vote for the first Poet of the Week. Your flowstyle is in a category of its own. Brilliant work.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nia Maishani thanks folr the compliment and the response for real you're feeling me all right
     
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