Black Poetry : Gratifyd Grapefruits trough the Grapevine...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jan 29, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the year 2002 ...
    a time in search of love..
    both hide behind hurt surcumstances..
    Both minion seth our hopes on minim miracles..
    the mous on our right hands was our best man...
    click...tikke tikke tik ...click tikke tikke tik...
    Private love language causing noisy rumblings..
    that woke up hackers wich wanted to sucking at the arguing
    and internet lovemaking...
    and murder an upcoming lovestory..
    Directors giving direction for the shot..
    love her ...
    love her not....CUT CUT CUT....
    love him
    love him not.. .SHUT UP...
    I love him WHAT?
    I love her WHAT?.......
    STOP CUT CUT CUT...
    In our room almost everything was beautifull,unbelieveble,untreu....
    but we both were scared cause we never saw eachothers face or flesh..
    huged...
    siffeled upon eachother like lions cats or dogs...
    showing our real self flirting with our feathers and lifting them up..
    only our souls toutched...
    Moments of insecuraty drives wild trough both of our trunks..
    manny tears making the jump...
    desire emotions screaming out of out longs...
    hopefully we questioned..
    is this for the long run?
    are we the sun?
    are we one?
    not just having fun...?
    Its not realy visible..
    but for love we are blind..
    and we keep commiting crimes...
    Just let it.
    just let it...
    you cant have this get out of it..
    let it go..
    its nothing..
    its just nothing..
    but out of nothing...
    came sumthing..
    talking,supporting,loving,longing ,wanting,....Learning...
    Questions..
    is it a good or bad thing..

    but what about that dream..
    i cried tears..
    directors....maybe it was not him....
    yes...
    thats a possibility....
    we will see..

    Were they mirrors on the falls screen..
    but the words ran in to me...
    word so soft and clean....
    but the emotions behind it..
    we both unshure...
    Ofcourse whatever the story is....
    if we would face to face...
    today..
    there has to be sumthing there..
    cause we know we both wont go..
    for the fake thing..
    we would never lie to ourselves...
    we would probebly laugh and say..
    well we learned from this situation..
    but unfortunaly ...
    there is no match.....

    Everyone has his romours..
    and his own speculations..
    they are this they are that..
    she is like this he is like that..

    What if we were just two lost souls..
    that found eachother...


    than i dont wanna Travel further....
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...

    So sweet...especially the end...

    "What if we were just two lost souls..
    that found eachother...


    than i dont wanna Travel further...."

    Nice.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    stay where u are ....lovin dis here stay put !!!
    woooooweeee!! two souls lost n' found each other
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Positive & Rich:heart:
    peace...









    Love L
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was tyte....I love this piece.......very tyte......and I agree with the others the end was beautiful.