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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please.....
    Please......
    Please grant Me....
    Please Grant me balance
    Please...
    Grant me serenity
    Please grant me Life
    I do Not know what to do
    Who is this I see
    Who is that be Hind me
    Please can you hear what I ask
    Will you answer my plead

    Granted......
    Please please save me
    They are grabbing and tugging
    They hurt me
    I am running
    I don't know what I am running from
    Please......Grant this for me
    I know I have fallen
    I know I brought default
    I know know I have lied
    I know I need life
    Please grant me please
    I can not breathe without your Love
    I am on the ground with straps around
    My arms waits legs and neck
    I am struggling
    I am reaching
    Please I see you
    Come down and Pick me up
    No... don't pick me up
    Please...Loose me and I will climb
    I will climb to your shoulders
    I will learn to fly
    Please grant me
    Please grant me
    please please please
    Grant Me to B
    e


    Granted......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ur granted thy wish
    up rise climb da hill
    your release from tis wall
    i see u
    please move slow
    uplift my dear and go
    ur granted to be
    free from da spell
    no need to struggle
    just rise .......GRANTED
     
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    May you truly be granted that which you ask, for we all need that balance in our lives. This was well felt indeed.
     
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    the reflection that you see in the sea of thyself
    is the granter of inner peace and no one else

    answers are deep within your heart of hearts
    but I can't grant you something you've already got

    peace lies dormat within our hearts and souls
    balance is restored when we choose the right road.......

    ^^ this poem is tight!!!!! I feel that way all the time...
     
  5. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ and Miss Miss Lady

    I Am Found
    With thee I see
    I am Lifted
    I bless thy name
    I worship
    Thee
    Has granted me
    Granted me
    I Lift my eyes
    I climb I climb
    You will Be My Souls Receiver
    I am Thy Believer



    I Present myself to thee
    I do bow
    I am in Grace
    For thy has shown me how
    Spoken to and through me
    And said that I am Now
    I have Strength
    And Now I am Granted
    Through you
    And My own Power


    I am smitten
    I have a dream
    For after i was stolen
    I found you and Now I am Serene
    I am Bountiful
    I have your Glory
    And As I promised
    I will continue to rise
    And I add this One
    I will also enbind
    that I will keep others
    from falling behind
    As I was granted
    they will find their grant
    Find their Stance
    Before you and Dance
    We will dance Bestow our Praise
    For we are free


    Still never taken for granted
    for being taken in and Granted
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u said it so well and so true and i love it .....u go gurl !
     
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    yo..... i love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Thankx so much
    I appreciate you


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