Black Poetry : Grandchildren

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da joy of tears
    and da love
    of two so dear
    i fear not a sorrow

    dis was my weekend bash
    da bubble bath splash
    as she wave
    and the whispers of
    grandaddy"
    was da song he gave
    my heart lit wit joy
    from dis little gurl & boy

    O' how beautiful tis is
    the things they do
    what they may say
    and how we play
    on da floor
    the little cars and bears
    the cuddling & hugs wit
    kissies too
    dis was pure love of
    Grandaddy & two
    O' how we laugh & play
    i haven't been dis way in years

    out shopping buying stuff
    as da little boy say
    thank u much
    baby gurl just caressed in hugs
    wow!
    I love these two
    my grand babies

    icecream round their faces
    as i trace da times da places
    me & my son had dis fun
    when he was ever so young

    did ya know how much fun they could be
    a grand child can make anybody smile in cheer
    have no worries not even a fear
    bring ya heart joy ,lovin touchies that's so dear
    and da things u wouldn't do to keep dem here

    well I know one thang
    i spent some money dis weekend
    and was happy doing it too
    look like a start of a new
    bringing up these little two
    lil Dyrell & Kalyan
    my grands
    my babies
    our tyme
    space
    dis
    pl.
    GRANDCHILDREN"
    :kiss: :heart: :love: :heart: :kiss: :D
     
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    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, my goooooooooossshhhhhh

    $$RICHNE$$...
    $$RICHNE$$...
    $$RICHNE$$!!!

    I don't believe I can really convey to you what a sparkling work of beauty you have scribed here. I mean I think I felt every bit of the joy and love and gratitude emanating from this peace. I enjoyed every word of it, and am truly touched by it.

    Excellent work--straight from the :heart: ; those babies are truly blessed, and may this peace bless others.

    Rated: :toast::toast::toast::toast::toast:
     
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    Dyrell and Kalyan are blessed to have such an intelligent, caring, and generous grandfather...may you and yours be eternally blessed :):):)

    1luv
     
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    Nia.......

    my head is in circles coz they made me so full of joy
    as night fall and the bed call after their bath and i tell
    ya i haven't did dis in a long time it felt so **** good
    changing little pampers u know dem luv's and that mess
    she made when eatting had baby food all ova me and all
    i could do was laugh
    I love how she sit and look at me in a maze
    then smile so big as if i was a clown
    i wonder what she was thinking !! hahaha.
    gurl that boy he be running round da house calling me
    (grandaddyyyyy)) and those words was comfort
    not one tear fell dis weekend fo sho nothing but laughter
    fill da rooms
    these two r healing my deepest wound
    mending my heart
    sure deep inside where my inner thoughts reside
    still fill wit pain but having my babies caress thangz
    u know i was reading dem da 23rd Psalm and a breeze
    of cool wind hit me i looked up only to see dis face smiling
    it was my son looking on his two children from heaven
    and i ask what's wrong !
    again da breeze hit and he left..... my son is happy & pleased
    knowing his babies o'kay
    wow!! what a weekend to remember & charish forever
     
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    2fish

    da blessing is within these babies as love came flowing out
    like sunshine and so much warmth ova flo i was at peace
    to hear sweet callings of ya grandson and da baby gurl
    saying dadada was beautiful music surely what was left 4
    me to be as well to do is a blessing
    i can't replace their Father but i can be da best Grandfather
    they could wish upon
    i haven't shoped 4 baby stuff in years we walked in every
    store in da mall i had bags good lord
    they put a dent in my mint but i have fun getting broke !:D
    grandchildren is a rare gemstone a pearl of essence
    and the joy they bring even when ya down
    i had a tyme of my life .......da blessing is these babies
    i have a long road to walk but i will walk it not 4 me
    but them ......Thankz:heart:
     
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    man im too young to understand stuff like that. You leave me in awe and overwhelmed. i hope one day i understand the beauty that you see.
     
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    truely u will as moma used to say keep living ....
     
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    $$RICH$$ The two grandchildren I have to raise make me laugh everyday. They also take my energy away, but the laughter always revives. Enjoy the blessings and know what a blessing you are to them too.
     
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    What a beautiful scene, Rich! May you continue to be a positive force in these precious lives.

    peace and blessings,

    alyce
     
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    I have to say it again; $$RICH$$, your words are truly fascinating on this issue. A truly remarkable account of the time you spent with the Littles reading to them from Book of Pslams. Truly fascinating! Continued blessings to you and yours, and great to have you back on the boards.

    :wink:
     
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