Black Poetry : Grand Opening

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh pen again
    I do this dance
    quizzically pondering
    the entrance of romance
    I am open
    As my pen lingers in this samba
    of words oft used way back when
    Ions ago in some senses,
    only a moment ago in others.
    I sway
    hand in hand with my quill
    with feathery, flighty movements,
    I will...
    dip the tip fantastic
    openly flowing
    in the ink that is you,
    tasting and savoring,
    learning and growing,
    literally and figuratively
    submerged in the knowing...
    But dancing in lavishly thick Nubian ink
    isn't as easy as one would think
    Can't just waltz on through
    For if you do. you'll miss out
    on examining each ebony drop
    So, pour it on thick, let your onyx ocean
    flow in waves that just won't stop
    Let us clasp hands and tango
    when the river runs deep and rages
    Then we can appreciate the smooth ripples
    that inspire me to write infinite pages
    I begin to tingle, as your warm ebony
    ink slowly fills the chamber of my pen
    It in turn oozes a chocolate elixir
    onto the parched parchment, and then
    each letter,
    each word,
    each phrase
    embraces into this lyrical slow dance
    quizzically pondering
    the entrance of romance
    Oh pen, again...
    I am open....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'm here for the opening
    of ya grand stand plan
    feelin da sway of ya pen
    and the ink that drips right in
    tasting da flava of ya orbs
    like dancin in romance
    down to da core
    as yo scribe slow roll
    dancin in one sweet stroll
    yes pen again i'm open
    to you and what u do
    every drip of ink
    every dip of lines
    every hance u pose
    feel like a red rose

    I loved this to heart watz yes i do ..
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The dance of the pen
    Is a joyous one indeed
    Whether blue, black, or red
    the ink plants a seed
    As words and verses form
    the quill strokes broad and free
    writing the secrets of romance
    Every metaphor
    Every simile
    Each alliteration
    I flow them, openly

    I appreciate your response in flow Rich. Thank you, and welcome back!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through every line
    pose birth unto the canvas
    as the ink bring forth life
    words clash by da hand
    openly flowin in tune
    kissin the page
    drippin ink making new beginnings
    alliteration and verbs speaks
    and the feeling of a grand opening
    as the center stage become your
    space ...........love this piece
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sista watz:
    This is so eloquently written. The words made my
    mind float. Your pen is so beautiful.


    Much Luv
     
  6. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed the feel of this going in


    Thanks for expressing,
    the O' soul-good feeling
    of the ink's flow for us.


    SmoovV
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So nice of you to bless this piece twice Rich. Yes, that pen can release a spark into one's life as well as the page. Thank you brotha poet.
    That was quite kind of you 4Everluv, I have been enjoying your pen as well.
    Thank you Smoov, just expressing the joy of letting that ink speak. Appreciated.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree totally, Your pen in any color is still a awesome flirt to the paper. I enjoyed this piece, the art of it made me smile.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!
    I'm at a lost for words!!
    Amazing work.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If this piece made you smile, then I must be doing something right Queent. Thank you for gracing this vibe.
    Sweetbabyface, hat was quite a humbling response. Thank you so much poetess.
     
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