Black Poetry : Gracious Father!

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  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why cant for once i can let my guard down
    and relaxe
    If they needed me
    Why when i needed me i couldn't help me.
    Doin my thang but the good thang
    not noticing my sencitivity
    Spoken to bluntly
    But im not appriciated for doin whats right.
    What happens when the child separates from its own well being not knowing it was the fault of the hands that tried to help
    Only meaning the best
    Someone has deeply prayed for me because many times i could have been dead
    instead of the demons roaming the
    earth
    They decided to **** with MY head!!!
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simple....but it comes with a powerful, underlining message...
     
  3. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne thanx for the comment ....congratulations on your graduation... i just graduated too! God bless you in your futher life
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep your head up!
    count your blessings(easier said)
    and stay strong!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed be strong wit ya head up high
    the blessing will cover u
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you..those demons are sumthing else! But you can wwether anystorm...don't let anything get to you(it can if you let it!) Great piece..i feel the message youre sending :)
     
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    Teach my sister
     
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