Black Poetry : Gotta' Man

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You say you want a good woman,but you don't know how to treat her.
    Talkin' and braggin' to all your friends on how you cheat her.
    Fussin' and arguin' when she accomplishes
    Afraid because you're down in "Bumoplishes"
    Can't provide for her eye or the taste of her belly.
    Get out and get a real job you'll see how to live wealthy.
    She put up with your childish games
    Even picked out some pictures of your"Throw Back Chicks"...all lames
    Posted up on the corner locin'
    Wishin' and hopin'
    Dirtied up the sheets with the smell of sex..never sweet
    The love you make is hard like old freeto lays
    When she's out you sit on the bed and pout
    Baby gotta' have a life to that's why she put you out
    Missin' ya water because the tea pot stopped steamin'
    No longer your slave she speaks softly without screamin'
    Seen her at the club you tried to make her notice
    She turned and looked at you then said,"No time fo' this!"
    Gotta' man now,benefits,and the sweet thuggin' lovin'
    Left you with your sluts and pros no more kissin' and huggin'
    Met with a price of love so sweet
    Your cheap coins they have been beat
    Heart swellin'...never her eye again....from this prince
    Gotta man now not a boy don't that make sense?
     
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    make sense too me !!!!
    well said flow let 'em know da truth
    flow on !!
     
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    No reason to settle for less, your words were strongly felt here, and they flowed very well with the fast pace of this piece.
     
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    Thanx love tellin' the truth :wink:
     
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    And let the truth be told...this was a very beautiful piece...like reading your work.
     
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    as always sister...
    I see
    you keeping it real...
    flow on...
     
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    thanx for the love everyone :wink:
     
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