Black Poetry : Gotta blues mood for you....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 8th wonder, May 17, 2001.

  1. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Senti-mental is the mood
    for this dull ache blues
    clouds move ever so fast
    the days have no meaning..

    Time is stillborn in this zone..

    People talk, not knowing…
    their words fall on deaf ears..

    Don’t they know im not there?
    but with you…
    in these blues
    senti-mental blues…

    I refuse to acknowledge another moment..
    until your body is as close as my heart says you are…..
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    entering from the garden of serenity

    but i am near...
    closer than you could ever know
    standing in your shadow when you
    dream holding you close when you
    cry loving you when you think of me;

    my love time only stands still when
    you and i hold close in the eyes of
    God as a crowd of witnesses smile
    at the testimony of our embrace;

    i smile as you smile....

    returning to the garden holding your picture...:love:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Piece
    No Love Shown to these
    I think alot of poets feel
    That you have to be a $$RICH$$
    Or a Bishop to get Love
    We need to be able to Love & Show Love
    Nice Piece Poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i am....indeed this was divine & deeply felt
     
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