Black Poetry : got this poetry thang

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got this poetry thing

    I got this poetry thag
    Man
    I reversed the books
    My first poems were just for looks
    Im a rapper who lust for hooks
    How can my audience lust for my books?
    Are my rhymes
    Bout today’s times
    Are they mimes of designs
    That shower
    When a man goes down
    And the taste of the Amazon
    Mysterious
    I’m serious
    Im surreal
    But Ron won’t let me
    Be freaky
    As I want to be

    I got this poetry thang
    That was a hobby
    So I was predictable
    It was pitiful
    That I wrote bout what I went thru
    But in the hut
    Nobody felt me
    Or understood
    I was a ****
    A mut
    In my own image
    Or mirages
    And camouflages that my mind set for me
    Can I give Mya and Shawn the best of me

    I got this poetry thang
    That I write for people
    Who may not understand themselves?
    I seen a young girl
    Writing poetry
    I wanted to comment
    But to each is their own
    Who am I to say she could have wrote it better
    If that is her
    Her feelings
    I am not one to lament criticism
    Although as a reader
    I am the critic
    You
    My friend is the critic of mine
    My rhyme
    Which may not rhyme?
    At all times
    Are add up to 10 dimes
    But one dime at a time
    Is how one purchased lime
    And sweet fruit
    That grows as each flow is posed
    And one smells with his nose
    And he is instantly froze
    I got this poetry thang
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "And sweet fruit
    That grows as each flow is posed"

    nice line

    i feel you on this poetry thang
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe flow on
    dis was awesome
     
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