Black Poetry : Got rhymes that sweep across microphones and boss dome

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  1. MADDRAPPER

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    Got rhymes that sweep across microphones and boss dome
    Even If I toss wrong rhymes, got strong lines with costs alone
    Enough to kill a man and thrill a clan of guerillas with stones
    Addicted to chronic restricted in Ebonics my exposures are
    Closures to the world but among leaders, hung readers bazaar
    Construct rhymes that corrupt minds like slander and propaganda
    Leap microphones and slap-weak domes like superman wearing a bandana
    Chant plots and plant crops like farmers with horse and plow
    My voice somehow moves cats my lyrics proves that so bow-wow!
    Recipe never switch you can ask DESTEE AND RICH its all chow
    Flow correct junk and project funk like Rick James with quick flames
    Just fire and desire on a meaner spree like Tina Marie this stuff tames
    Look I’m a wild soldier with style bolder than DESTINY CHILD
    Doing my duty like the brewing booty of Beyounce’ girl smile
    These threads Squeeze heads like fitty caps too many ****ty raps
    Like P Diddy perhaps need to make a band and destroy fake plans ASAP
    Divide towns into sections ride around with true possessions and crap
     
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    [​IMG] Got rhymes that sweep across microphones and boss dome
    Got rhymes that sweep across microphones and boss dome
    Even If I toss wrong rhymes, got strong lines with costs alone
    Enough to kill a man and thrill a clan of guerillas with stones
    Addicted to chronic restricted in Ebonics my exposures are
    Closures to the world but among leaders, hung readers bazaar
    Construct rhymes that corrupt minds like slander and propaganda
    Leap microphones and slap-weak domes like superman wearing a bandana
    Chant plots and plant crops like farmers with horse and plow
    My voice somehow moves cats my lyrics proves that so bow-wow!
    Recipe never switch you can ask DESTEE AND RICH its all chow
    Flow correct junk and project funk like Rick James with quick flames
    Just fire and desire on a meaner spree like Tina Marie this stuff tames
    Look I’m a wild soldier with style bolder than DESTINY CHILD
    Doing my duty like the brewing booty of Beyounce’ girl smile
    These threads Squeeze heads like fitty caps too many ****ty raps
    Like P Diddy perhaps need to make a band and destroy fake plans ASAP
    Divide towns into sections ride around with true possessions and crap
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    ur rhymes couldnt sweep across microphone if a real mc dropped 1 and ur janitorial *** had to clear it up wiv a broom
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    Got rhymes that sweep across microphones and boss dome
    Even If I toss wrong rhymes, got strong lines with costs alone

    Nice, liked this line.
    Enough to kill a man and thrill a clan of guerillas with stones
    Addicted to chronic restricted in Ebonics my exposures are
    Closures to the world but among leaders, hung readers bazaar

    Liking it, not sure where the bazaar bit fits in, it seemed a little bit forced, but it was still nice. Multi/s were good.
    Construct rhymes that corrupt minds like slander and propaganda
    Leap microphones and slap-weak domes like superman wearing a bandana

    I ******* loved this bar, came off as ill.
    Chant plots and plant crops like farmers with horse and plow
    My voice somehow moves cats my lyrics proves that so bow-wow!
    Recipe never switch you can ask DESTEE AND RICH its all chow

    Dope, liked the first multi. The Destee and Rich part went right over my head, either it's something we don't get over here or just something that I don't get.
    Flow correct junk and project funk like Rick James with quick flames
    Just fire and desire on a meaner spree like Tina Marie this stuff tames

    Thought this was ill too, nice stuff homie.
    Look I’m a wild soldier with style bolder than DESTINY CHILD
    Doing my duty like the brewing booty of Beyounce’ girl smile

    Nice, I really like your multi use.
    These threads Squeeze heads like fitty caps too many ****ty raps
    Like P Diddy perhaps need to make a band and destroy fake plans ASAP
    Divide towns into sections ride around with true possessions and crap

    Nice, only problem I had here was the pronunciation of ASAP and the ending of the last line seemed a little strange. Other than that, **** was nice dawg. Like I said before, keep it up. I know these other cats be saying they don't understand your ****, but the two threads of yours that I've peeped, I've been able to understand everything. Good lookin'.

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    tyte joint ......no links brutha in poetry i removed them
     
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    Throwin down the rhymes, flow on Madd.
     
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    a coffee house poet

    Foreva destee underground
    ***** duck the mic when i come around
    Control hammer like the mighty dog
    Bringin' thunda down
    Now you're in store for predator
    Like refugees I come to settle the score
    Half-baked metaphor, that taste even better raw
    Hardcore holy war
    Hits from the resevoir, southpaw saboteur
    Land sharks get they chin checked when jabba jaw
    Time to walk my Labrador
    Livin' out my dreams, at the same time shatter yours
    Code red fill 'em full of lead
    Grateful Dead live from detroitstead
    Tiger Kung Fu know the ledge
    Check the full fledged u knucklehead
    Clam ya, livin' on the edge u used to be the best

    Uh huh, i speak for unheard
    Caught in the Matrix
    Sound from the sub-basement, "Spread the word"
    Like uncureables from dirty bird, beyond basic
    John desteedoo these fake ****** too, give 'em replacements
    The thrilla of a detroit killa
    Bubonic plague any MC, that swear he illa
    Inject the dufus with the lupus
    Yukmouth rhymes that leave him toothless
    My filled fly and filled groupless
    Observe the record, livin' out my name Repid
    Study hookupman and all his methods
    And through his ethnic, learn to expect the unexpected

    Be easy, speak easy
    This one be off the heazzzaaayyy
    Like my pubic hair, black and greazzzaaayyy
    cause its
    Hot time, summer in the city
    My people in destee represent, get busy
    The heat-seeker, on a mission from Hell's kitchen
    I gets in where I fits in for head touchin', listen
    Enemy, is the industry got me flippin'
    I don't give a **** tel that ***** and a *****
    I'm killin', snipin', catchin' murder cases
    Desert Storm-in, I be searchin' for oasis
    As I rule a mile with a racist
    Go head, ya'll floss wit it
    Walk wit, I slap your boss wit it
    Navy blue, detroit fitted, I'm cold frost bitted
    Two puffs and off wit it
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    nice flow dawg and all this from a coffee house poet...lol...old rappers never die they do spoken word ...peace :donttell: ..hookup
     
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    thanks for all the replies for real
     
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