Black Poetry : Got me Wishin...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Feb 2, 2006.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm crushin ova you,
    got me feelin like elementry saterday night blues
    cuz your involved with someone,
    and you say he makes you heart leap
    in a way that i nevah can,
    that love comes in only one gender
    and you already got a man but..
    What i'm sayin is...give me a chance

    Let me hold you like only another woman can...
    Cuz when i think of you,
    I feel like all the things i love,
    settlin gently in my hips,
    makin them wide and full,
    satisfied...but not...

    cuz you say your in love with a man...
    and i can't give you what you want...

    -story
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this flo poet flow on.:wave:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release... deep emotions on the wish factor !
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many can relate to longing for someone who we cannot have. So good to read you again, the story.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece poet
     
  6. PatriceCQueen

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    you are 16 so i cannot say too much, you are a brave writer tho that has a definate command of the word and i look forward to reading your work

    Peace

    Patrice keep writing
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop:

    WOW!
    The honesty and naked emotion in this one
    is simply matchless.
    I like that in a poet(ess)

    I think everyone has been here in some form or another.
    Very good work

    Oh yeah....
    WHERE U BEEN??????
    Missed u.

    Peace and love
    twision
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOT!!!!!!!!
     
  9. queentswana

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    Heyyyy story, it's so good to be reading you again, it's like old times,
    needless to say...you dropped a bomb on us, thanks ...keep in touch.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was hot poet
    Yes we all want someone
    Taken or not
    Much love on this piece
     
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