Black Poetry : Got Me Thinking

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got me thinking about what I used to do.
    You got me questioning me and you.
    Makes me wonder how strong you are..
    Makes wonder if we’ll get that far.

    You got me thinking about write and wrong.
    You got me questioning just how long
    We are going to last.
    Will we come to past and be just a memory.
    And eventually…
    We will have new and different lives.
    Oh how I strive to see the light.
    Now that you’ve got me thinking.

    You got me thinking about my morals…
    And all of my values.
    Let me practice integrity.
    I don’t believe in infidelity.
    Yet I’m not practicing what I preach…
    And instead onto you I leech.
    Are you beginning to follow me?

    You are man…
    Internal within my mind…
    Is where you will find…
    You.
    In such a divine manner…
    I want to be the answer…
    To all your dreams…wishes and prayers…
    But I dare to ask that of you.
    I hope you’re starting to follow me.

    You see…
    I get an erection…
    When hit with an injection of your love.
    You are divinely…
    Sublimely…
    Construed within my mental…
    Using a stencil to dig and pry you out of my soul.
    Yet I can’t control the urge to love you.
    Have you caught up yet?
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOH...

    too much thinking going on up in hea.

    just do whatcha do.:) smilingly.

    peace.
     
  3. alyce

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    you got me thinking

    bout that erection you get.

    Feeling this scribe!

    A
     
  4. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FEELIN YA!!!

    You see…
    I get an erection…
    When hit with an injection of your love.


    this here was deeply felt sis!! Been there!!!;)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh Huh

    I SO dug this one hea... loved it!

    Reas
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!!

    Thanks guys!!! I"m glad you liked it. and baller...if you had seen me yesterday believe me...my mind was running wild.
     
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    i am liking this...tight drop
     
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