Black Poetry : got lost in her*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt einstien's theory of relativity
    when she
    walked by
    our
    III's
    met causing time to

    sl
    ow

    do
    wn

    as if every step she took
    aligned with my heartbeat
    that glance
    turned to gaze

    seemed as passionate as
    all the love you could ever feel
    in three lifetimes--

    yet she kept

    wa
    lk
    in
    g.

    (****.)
     
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    we often get lose in the myth of her beauty
    as she walks by.............did she even notice me....!?
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyght...as usual, sean. very nice, dear poet.
     
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    seany.


    ...she kept walkin'? then... why the hell didn't you
    follow her?!! anyway... i enjoyed reading you again.

    thanks for sharing...

    itsallLove, chile. :D

    elayne.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah

    Dat happend to me to before...lol Dig the way you did it!

    Reas
     
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    you got it sean...
    i always enjoy your reads!
    -7:spinstar:
    (sounds like somethin i'd do)
     
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    that was nice.....next time go after her!
     
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