Quiet Poetry Lounge : Got it Going

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Apr 19, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got it Going

    This rap affair is blistery leaving an air of mystery about
    Me, acquire skills as my desire builds to greed rebel without
    A cause on a route with flaws no doubt the laws prohibit
    My exhibit of power, my brain was intended to be explicit
    With flame splendid after visits with dragons and now hurling
    Magic like the Merlin tragic on the movie Excalibur swirling
    A knife, multi-rhyming a new trend no true friends in this
    Game, sometimes my facts are like whack contracts with a twist
    Nobody wanna sign this, go-out-doors and flow clout that soars
    Like mosquitos and torpedos from submarines, this thug cleans floors
    My skills are ill a swell surprise that must be televise via satellite
    On every battle site got rattled hype and hard to straddled the night
    When bright bazaar stars shine in your face on a hadcore pace
    Of becoming famous, oppose my hair when expose to air a waste
    Of Afro sheen under my cap it grow keen got dreads while in town
    protected by a rubber got rejected by my lover for playing around
    and laying down with another chick discover quick girl not a clown
    my relationship is exposed to air wanna hose this affair and cool it
    off rumors can be cruel and false love is a tool that cost ready to go git
    kit duel like David Hasserhoff and become the Knight Rider having a fit
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a magician you just keep pulling those rhymes out of your creative hat.
     
  3. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rhyme was sick expecially the part about becoming Knight Rider and Having a fit! Way to bring back them throwback shows & show em how it's done!
     
  4. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow.....You just threw it out there.........:eek:hmy:
    Get Your Flow On Rhyme!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another amazing lyrical maze u created here i enjoyed this joint
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Comming Back To give you more Props:D
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props to everyone for real
     
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