Black Poetry : Got Crack?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NapturallyYours, Aug 22, 2006.

  1. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful powder, soft and white
    Will you be my lover tonight?
    So chemically perfect, clean and pure
    I can’t resist your sweet allure

    There are so many things I can do with you
    Smoke and snort to name a few
    The money I spend is worth the gain
    To go a few hours without this pain

    The pleasure you give
    Is gone so fast
    It’s all I can do
    To make my high last

    Please, oh please don’t leave me alone
    When I’m with you I feel at home
    You comfort me in ways that no one can
    If I have you, I don’t need a man

    Before you arrived I was filled with strife
    With all the duties of a mother and wife
    I don’t have anything else to call my home
    They don’t even answer when I call on the phone

    And so what I sell my body
    To make a little cash
    No one has died
    From getting some @ss

    Where are you going? Don’t leave me now!
    How can you just let my high come down?
    Crack can be such an insolent jerk
    Now I have to get up and go to work

    Don’t you sit there and judge me
    I’ll get my life back on track
    One day I’ll move on
    And leave this crack…

    Napturally Yours
     
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    i'm glad i neva needed that white broad....
    tyte flow poet....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Yes, I am beautiful, I am pure white,

    I came here purposely, to take your life.
    my first attact, is at your brain...
    to gladly send your @ss insane.

    I hold more power in a tiny glass...
    and just pass it to you for a piece of @ss.
    [email protected], you forgot to use protection,
    now ya out spreading a nasty infection.

    But don't worry I'll never leave you alone,
    cause I have now become your only home.
    that beautiful black family, you had before,
    just couldn't take you and the ******** no more.

    Who's your maker?..your mentor?..your God?
    I'm the King..with the almighty rod!
    don't I free you from your worries and pain?
    didn't I strip you from your African name?

    Since I got ya hooked, here's my game,
    I succeeded in driving your @ss insane!

    pssst...
    And guess who's NOT gonna wear that blame?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one form i never had to feel , tyte joint on da real
     
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    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flowback Queen T. I love how you took it to the next level.

    Napturally
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    drugs

    can destroy your life
    and addiction come in all forms
    not always what take in
    but what you put out

    dang this brought back memories of the Crack Wars of NY in the late 80's and early 90's
     
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    I really like the way you described the drug like a temptress. Such a dangerous escape. Enjoying your flows as always.
     
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    Cool flow!
    I especially liked when 'crack' leaves and she feels alone and angry.
    Those are usually the feelings that accomodate abandonment.
    This was very creative!
    You have my attention.

    peace and love
    twision
     
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    this was a nice little piece poet
    very interesting drop for real
    keep up the good work
    7/10
    uno
     
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