Black Poetry : Got a job great that operate my finance try for a chance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Nov 18, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got a job great that operate my finance try for a chance
    On buying a car, see a nice device with bucket seat, advance
    Navigation system with the gravitation of wisdom can find
    Directions twist on corrupt roads and disrupt codes of divine
    Potholes my plot is bold to get a comfortable ride with pride
    No hurt fame just an alert brain that pertain to getting a new ride
    This is the proper technique to correct streets and roll hard
    With the top dropped to hot spots such as clubs and bars
    Touch pave with dubs and leave scars burn rubber with cars
    Got a pistol with heat and a missle under the seat hate carjackers
    Backers of crime attackers with blind minds a bunch of bad actors //
    On the TV watch COX live and this oxidize my brains for destruction
    Sad not wise how they advertise false stuff leave flames and combustion
    In lives, dang riding in a jeep gliding down streets its fat in here
    Breathing the atmosphere fun and proof the sunroof open bring sincere
    Wildlife the style’s nice want a girl but this dang squirrel drops
    Through my sunroof start singing rock me tender trying to hurl props
    Now this unheard of bird flies in started singing I’m dring and blinging
    Cling to the steering wheel now MAX from cox drops a fox in banging
    My back seat at first he had a whack beat swallowed a bird then spit
    It out then sing some legit clout as the lead singer “ baby baby this it
    Rock me tender rock me slowly then the commercial went off oh ****!
     
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    see sometime it can be just dat way when we notice it's over
    nice drop
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ thanks for the feed on this one for real
     
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    You've got word play galore here, rhymebad.
     
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    LOL!

    Not sure why, but the ending had me laughing incontrollably.

    Rhymebad, you still got it bad. Mad skills shown here, true inspiration! Much appreciated.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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