Quiet Poetry Lounge : Got a hold on me !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The loving spirit
    took hold of my
    hand caressed
    my soul
    he got a hold on me
    gave me life & eyes
    to see air to breath
    and a mind to think
    even strenght to
    rise when my day
    seem weak
    he got a hold on me
    awaken me daily
    inside his script
    wordz to live by
    to never be defeat
    i praise his name
    morning , noon & night
    he's my shinning star
    he is the path of light
    he took a hold of me
    and vow to loveth me
    forth i am in his room
    i learn to live and lived
    to learn his word that
    earthly roam
    i pray in his nameth sake
    for thy art wit me
    in guiding spirit
    he stood me on the battle
    field of war to show me
    this battle not mines alone
    he carried me when i fall
    walk me cross danger at
    call he comfort my soul
    and mend my heart gave me
    peace when trouble start
    I so loveth de Lord
    he got a hold on me
    something i never want to
    let go hope he hold me
    the rest of my days
    til he call me home for eternal
    praise and rest this soul in
    peace for everlasting
    he got a hold on me !
    I love him
    I love him
    I really love the LORD
    thy Father whom art
    in Heaven :thanks:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful flow
    feelin ya words
    on point and loud and clear...
    beautiful as always my brother King
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Angel when u give ya love to thee
    he so loveth back gracefully wit comfort
    i praise his name and pray unto him daily
     
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    Thats right!
    GLORIFY HIM!
    LIFT HIM UP!
    HE IS WORTHY
    OF OUR PRAISE!
    THAT was wonderful!
    AMEN!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply beautiful, yes, everything goes better, when you pray, I know that's how it is for me. Wonderful prose of prayer.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big yes and thankz sistah's
    prayer and love unto him
    unconditionally make life
    so much better to live in
    humble sweet thanks to u both
    sistah purplemoons & sistah watz
     
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    Oh, this is so beautiful, $$RICH$$. Just a pretty piece of work. Funny you should write this today too, cause I was having a hard time earlier on. I prayed and soon my deep depression started to life.

    Much love to you, $$RICH$$.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Prescious lord, take my hand...lead me on...
    reading that deep piece made me want to sing out loud...
    I got great joy out of reading this and great warnth as well...thanks for sharing this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz gempis happy this u can feel and whatever
    had that hold was released

    thank u Queentswana it do make da heart wanna sing loud
    go head sistah sing in praises of he
     
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    NICE DROP MAN!!!!!!
    THE FLOW IS ON IT!!!!!!!!!














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