Black Poetry : Got a critical style like a political exile so it marinated

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got a critical style like a political exile so it marinated
    with crime and devastated even the minds of the educated
    produce strong fears after long years of writing and fighting
    and like a dumb cow I somehow manage to do damage by igniting
    beef on plates with beliefs great Burger king burn bazaar oil
    when they charbroil sirloin steak, save my interior wrap my car in foil
    **** shame I have to campaign to get replies on this site
    must have lead feet I feel like dead meat wow I’m being disliked
    have glamour in my grammar not the academic jargon that’s
    a rare skill in an affair filled with slang and dang overly fat
    curse words the worse nerds I ever laid eyes on yall, write
    English to excite distinguished guests they laugh all night
    A winner incredible like vinegar on vegetables this stuff delight
    Taste buds and waste scrubs I see lace at clubs try pick up girls
    sick corrupt world of first come first serve tight skirts slick butts hurls
    crush rooms and flush goons down toilets after I eat mushrooms
    they give me muscle so I live to hussle another day as a plush groom
    ready to marry and carry a girl across the thrush hole then rush a tune
    on my CD a real slow song as the sex glow strong bedsprings go kaboom!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sleezy and disputed sexual emotions easily computed like
    strong number and long cucumbers I’ve eluded the hype
    in a mini-skirt with plenty of flirt devastated and hot because
    of a calibrated **** off the scale for female really had to pause
    and think even Santa Claus wink his eye at a brown cutie
    with a round booty renown and fruity in astound nudity
    RHYME I was walking around in a gown this boy came to the door
    With game galore looked at my body and wanted to know more
    He has a sexual sweet tooth with a terrific cavity added specific
    Gravity now he can chow down, may open my thighs let him sniff it
     
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    "Disliked" is something we don't have on this site
    what you're feeling, it just ain't right!

    If you must campaign...then do it with some flair,
    by showing other poets how much you do care.

    We have all kinds of poets with so much to share,
    let them know that we stopped by there.

    It takes just a moment to say: Hey that's nice,
    and the replies will come back to you... twice.

    We have no time to put each other down,
    or pick up folks feelings from off the ground.

    If we each show some love on this very site,
    there'll be no room for the fuss or fight.

    To You with luv :em3600:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime love is combind
    when given from da heart of shine
    love is all we have within
    say hey to a poet n' friend

    sho u get love and we see u tall
    feel ya flo and ya lyrical call
    poetry in tis site is like an open mall
    like poet jack and mnnie and paul

    we are one and one for all
    to get one must give
    that's how destee's poet's live
    tis site is right in da lime lights
    so joy up and move wit uplifting soul
    ya in da place of love & gold

    molding da heart and da mind
    give love let it shine

    much peace and respect to da skillz

     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you

    rhymebad we've been down this road before

    NOBODY DISLIKES YOU

    you don't get love

    because you don't spread none

    has nothing to do with dislike

    you sit back like you write the illest stuff on earth

    but other people write ill stuff too

    show love and you get love

    what goes around comes around

    you give nothing so you get nothing

    that's the streets mane

    i know you know
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I respond to most of your poems, rhymebad, not all but most. I can't put it any better than the poets who have responded prior to myself. Give love and you'll be more apt to receive. The poetic styles here run the gamut, surely you'll find something that suits your fancy.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rhyme pure and like wine mature on a shelf while bottled up
    Then throttle corrupt in a cup held to lips well yall sip and duck
    Even STARBUCK knows flavor flows to the neighbor’s nose
    Like an ill sore with a pus filled core, my brain’s alarm with wise
    Flows they harmonize and grows, my mother give consent
    For me to live and pay rent must get a job to be relevant
    Rap to an illing nation after filling out an application this brother is free
    Wreck minds and collect rhyme gather them in a cluster I rather be
    A buster than a sucker, use glue to amuse a crew have sticky verses
    After sickly rehearses that quickly disperse doubt about how this nurses
    folks
     
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