Black Poetry : gossip

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwordstris, May 1, 2003.

  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sitting here in my room thinking about how you so nicely played me.
    Proudly walking around with sum "not better than me chic."
    making me look like sum "i let my man sleep with other gurls chic."
    In front of my friends making me look like sum" i can't control my man chic."
    But little did you know you played yourself too looking like sum " oh my god don't tell me thats his new gurl she's nothing compared to tenesha dude."
    In front of your friends looking like sum "dude that fucc's annything with a pulse dude."
    You got us both looking like sum " **** they got sum serious issues people."
    People walking around calling us dumb ***** behind our backs.
    Because you can't control your hormones and all that.
    making me look like sum "that gurl really needs to leave him chic."
    making me look like sum" that gurl deserves a so much better"dicc."
    I'm sitting here in my room thinking about how you so nicely made yourself look like a fool because you lost the "good gurl"!!!!
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    props for you chick. nice scribe!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good gurl? beautiful understandin your words, and feelin em even more. :):):)
     
  4. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    i didn't think anyone would undestand this poem but hey i'm glad to know u like it and understand it thanx alot

    love for eternal,
    poeticwordstris
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice floow is tight
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow...very nice style...i love it!
     
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    i liked this a lot...i was feelin' it...the written word is a powerful thing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was well posed had me all up in it !
    keep flowin'
     
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