Black Poetry : Goodbye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blk Kween, Oct 31, 2001.

  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How am I to share my passion with you?
    When you are incapable of being loved

    My heart rests in my cupped hands
    You take a step back each time you feel its beat

    Scared of my feelings
    Knowing what could be
    You embrace an eyes handicap

    Blind to yourself,
    Not able to see me
    My heart has lost its healthiness

    For now,
    I must say goodnight

    I must now bow out

    Blk Kween
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kween

    I was gonna drop a verse on this one but I chose not to. Gotta let you know though... I'm definitely a fan of your scribes.

    A smart man would ask you not to leave...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  3. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason...

    thank you for your kind response.

    I appreciate you feeling my scribe.

    and....I have enjoyed you and your scribe as well.

    Blk Kween
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do what you must do....when one cannot recognize true love, then one is truly lost.......seems like this brother has lost his way....his loss....
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEEN THERE!

    TO STEAL A LINE FROM ALICIA KEYS , LETS JUST SAY A REAL MAN KNOWS A WOMANS WORTH!!!!!!!!! BEEN THERE DON THAT, AND EVEN IF IT'S NOT YO CAT, IT'S TIME FOR THAT MAN TO GET HIS HAT AND FIND HIMSELF AND HEAL HIS OWN SOUL. AS FOR THE LADY SHE SHOULD KNOW, GOD DON'T TAKE NOTHING AWAY THAT HE DOESN'T REPLACE, IN SOME WAY!:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what gone !!

    his lost coz a man of love would know
    ya heart is real and is yo love u offer
    so his lost sistah Kween.....I see someone new near:)
     
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