Black Poetry : Goodbye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 5, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The first day we met we experienced elective affinity
    Miracles always seem to occur when unaware of the possibilities

    You were in need of attention and warth while I needed sympathy and a place to settle down
    I was that soul that you could confide in and you were that rock to help build solid ground

    We became that alliance that was hard to break or make stumble
    But love doesn't last 4eva and solid rock eventually crumbles

    You needed your space and I needed my time, so we could justify how we really feel
    I ran away, but I came back, but I guess its too late cuz she's not here

    Listen yall...
    My baby is gone
    But thats alright, man... thats okay

    Even though it hurts deep, deep inside...

    My beautiful angel is gone
    And its way too late

    I'd do anything to possess her love again...

    But we all know...

    Time doesn't turn back that hands of time
    And when a women's done, she's done

    So I'm going to try my best to stick out my chest and move on...

    Goodbye beautiful...
     
  2. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truly sad........u had me since the 1st line........tight poem, keep ya head up.........much love...... :)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i feel u here ...........yes keep ya head up high
    continue on !
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww i know how this feels....great poem :)
     
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