Black Poetry : GOODBYE YOUNG FRIEND

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  1. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your quasi-love, poured over me..
    ...Like GOD'S tears during what~
    We humans have come to know as..
    ...A rainstorm..literally and figureatively~
    Saturating my soul..
    ...As angels whispered fervently, in their jealousy~
    About, what in the hell were you doing..
    ...With the likes of me!

    Yet, GOD in HIS infinite wisdom..
    ...Saw fit to put me in your life~
    Allowing me the opportunity to circumnavigate your sphere..
    ...Whereas you, knowing, without knowing exactly why~
    You nearly welcomed me there..
    ...In your utterly confused, disjointed, gonna come
    together world!

    Yet, when it does, and you do too..
    ...I'll be the first to yell out loud...you go girl!~
    Because, you'll know when you hear it..
    ...It's from the depths of me & completely true~
    You go girl!..even though I won't be going..
    ...With you!!*

    .....................SAARONCROWELL.....................
    (c)2001 all rights reserved
    *u already know whu u r
     
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    Goodbye?

    I'm not going anywhere!! And if I was, you'd know cause I'm sittin' right next to yah!!ROFL

    But, know that when I do...I'll only be an email, fax or phone call away!!!!

    Nice flow!
    Afri
     
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    Well alrighty then, luvin the floe
    now this girl has got to go!...lol
     
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    kinda sad
    she seems almost perfect

    very nice flow

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    saaroncrowell, i like your word usage in this piece...it's quite enjoyable. the flow is just right.
     
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    yes yes

    point well taken
     
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