Black Poetry : Goodbye To You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Euphoria, May 6, 2002.

  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We used to be so good together, so much more than now,
    Anything that went wrong, we'd work through it somehow,
    When we were together, nobody else mattered but us,
    I didn't want for anything, so long as I had your love,
    I'd go weak at your smile, get lost in your eyes,
    Now I yell at your frown and cry at your lies,
    I don't know where we went wrong or got lost along the line,
    I guess I should have known that all things die in time,
    So instead of looking out for you, I have to watch out for me,
    I have to find myself, there's other things I need,
    So I guess that this is my final goodbye to you,
    Although I thought you'd be the one I'd want to hold on to.

    28/4/02
    *Emma*
     
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    charleshandy Active Member MEMBER

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    I really likke this peace
    I'm a little love doctor myself
     
  3. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thanks for reading and for the responses. Muchly appreciated.. did that make sense?!?

    *Emma*
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emma..sometimes it hurts to let go of the familiar, but sometimes it hurts more to stay and lose yourself....

    K
     
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